Unapproved until you can answer the following questions. These are my personal issues, which I want you to answer.
Firstly, how many elemental types will you have access to? I can see where the Light comes from, and the wind considering you mentioned wings. Will there be any more?
Secondly, I quote:
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- Just like with Dark Wind, the light used in Dark Light are totally unaffected by factors that would usually be able to control them. Eg: The light would not be reflected by a mirror or a bender of light could not control it.
I have an issue with this, it must be said. Your opponents have no way of affecting these what-so-ever. This essentially says that YOU are a hybrid elemental controller, -HYBRID- and -YOU- being the key words here. There is essentially a law in any RPing community, at least in my opinion. A hybrid elementalist will never be as strong in a particular element as a pure elementalist would be.
Example: Black Mage vs Red Mage
Red Mage has access to White and Black magic, and is more resilient than the Black Mage. These Mages can even go toe to toe with monsters and hold their own!
Black Mage is a Black Magic Specialist. He has the weakest armor, but has the strongest Black Magic in the game!
Example Spells for a Red Mage:
White: Cure 1, Cure 2, Purify
Black: Fire 1, Fire 2, Blizzard 1, Blizzard 2, Thunder 1, Thunder 2
Example Spells for a Black Mage:
Black: Fire 1, Fire 2, Fire 3, Blizzard 1, Blizzard 2, Blizzard 3, Thunder 1, Thunder 2, Thunder 3, Meteor, Ultima.
Because a Red Mage chose to specialize in 2 areas, they are weaker in each area than a Black Mage or a White Mage would be, but because they have access to both, they are much more versatile.
End of ExampleNow, because I think like that, surely you can see where my issue lies here? Yes, I used a Final Fantasy explanation method, but it works. I believe in Power vs Versatility. The more elements you can use, the more tools you have in battle, but those tools should never be stronger than someone who can only use that particular element.
Yeah, I know you don't want someone controlling you attack, but not being able to affect it in any way is a bit much. Surely a light user could at least perhaps move it a little. I would be happy if you said it was challenging to affect, but it is possible if the opponent suffers more mental stress than if they were using their own abilities. That will probably help you as well in the long run, because i've just given you a reason to last slightly longer than people you fight
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Methias