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Akallas

Akallas


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PostSubject: Deus Creationem Interitum   Deus Creationem Interitum EmptyTue Oct 26, 2010 3:34 pm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Psi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(You have 15 points to spend between Burst and Trance.)

Burst: 12

Trance: 3

Rise:(You have 13 points to spend between Strength, Sense, and Self Heal)
  • Strength type: 0
  • Sense type: 8
  • Self Healing type: 5



Ability Name: Deus Creationem Interitum(God of Destruction and Creation) or The Pale Horse

Ability Description: Deus Creationem Interitum, which means God of Destruction and Creaton in Latin, is a ability that allows the individual to break down a object into basic elements and put it back together in a whole new way... if the user wishes so... Equivalence of mass is preserved unless there was a disturbance in the process of dematerilization and materialization. Most of the power in the ability, however, lies in the disintegration process, which is hundred times faster than the integration process.
The ability's second name comes from the bible. The Pale Horse of the Four horsemen of Apocalypse represents the Death. This name was given because of the way the objects around him disintegrate: they slowly break up into millions and billions of pieces not able to be seen by the naked or the microscope as if to rot away.
However, this ability, in all of its aggressive power, has a downside; it takes time. At first, the disintegration is atmoic level, then molecular. It takes at least 30 seconds to start the breaking down of molecular levels. And that is the highest it can go. The molecular level disintegration also has a speed. It starts with 10 cubic pm per second per second, and the max volume of disintegration allowed at the highest speed is 1 cubic cm per second. But this also decreases to 50 cubic mm per second if the object is moving, it doesn't matter the speed. But if they are really far away, like 1 km, he must stop his disintegration process before his brain goes 'shut down' on him and he falls into a coma. Using DCI puts hell lotta strain on the brain. So Akallas often fins himself nosebleeding once or twice a month.
The weakness to this ability is constant chemical reaction. The synthesis and decomposition of atoms and compounds disturb the flow of PSI that eats away the atoms and the moleculars. So fire is its gratest weakness.


Techniques:

Ares's Spear
This technique allows Akallas to focus his PSI power into a point in space and unleash a Melchsee's Lance like attack -on the outside, but that doesn't matter because Ares's Spear is invisible- that disintegrates anything it hits for 100 meters. A great sniping technique. The radius of the spear is 1 centimeter, so it's only great for sniping and close-range fights.

Burst Stream - Disintegration
Burst Stream is a way of gaining control of and stopping an extremely powerful (and, thus, unstable) Burst without causing a large amount of mental fatigue for the user. By allowing the Burst power to stream into the atmosphere, by circulating it between the inside of outside of the user's body, the strain on the user's brain is greatly lessened. (Psyren.wikia.com)
Akallas also uses this after he learned a thing or two during his time as hunting psychiers. So he put the Burst Stream on. This technique is used when Akallas is vulnerable to massive amount of enemies coming up to him at once or a very powerful enemy is in front of him. Then he activates this technique. This tehnique integrate anything that is...
[x: 0.03m < x < 3m ] So anything that is that much away from his skin, it's bascially disintegrated into molecular pieces.
Cooldown: 2 Posts

The Black Horse - Vanguard
This technique creates a wall that disintegrates anything that comes in contact with it. It starts with atomic in the beginning but as the object or the individual coming against the walls goes deeper into it, it begins to break the object down at molecular, compound, and eventually everything about the object. This is purely defensive mechanism and it always stays around him. It is also invisible.


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Ciro

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PostSubject: Re: Deus Creationem Interitum   Deus Creationem Interitum EmptyMon Nov 01, 2010 5:41 am

Your attack immediately destroys anything it touches which is a problem because that makes it an auto-kill ability.


On top of that, your ability doesn't seem to have anything to do with telekinesis in the least bit. And so that also presents a problem with it. Please edit it so that it is a bit more "player friendly"
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Akallas

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PostSubject: Re: Deus Creationem Interitum   Deus Creationem Interitum EmptyWed Nov 03, 2010 12:14 pm

I got rid of TK because I agree that my ability has nothing to do with it, but this ability is meant to be aggressive. Akallas is hunting other psychiers, remember?
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PostSubject: Re: Deus Creationem Interitum   Deus Creationem Interitum EmptyWed Nov 03, 2010 12:17 pm

Yes, but this ability is a 1 hit kill which I cannot allow. If it touched anyone they'd instantly die which is not fair for anyone. It can still be aggressive, but the ability and it's techniques shouldn't be a one hit kill.
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Akallas

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PostSubject: Re: Deus Creationem Interitum   Deus Creationem Interitum EmptyThu Nov 04, 2010 10:34 am

I tried to change that as much as possible so I added to the description. Read the highlighted part.
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PostSubject: Re: Deus Creationem Interitum   Deus Creationem Interitum EmptySat Nov 06, 2010 10:48 pm

1 hit kill=your ability, which does not fly by admins. Abilities can not kill anything instantly when they come into contact with something else. Make the approiate changes so this is no longer that case
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